Monday, April 21, 2008

Cookies, part 2


To sweeten the deal on our workshop this Thursday, I'll be providing two kinds of home-baked cookies: chocolate chip and soft oatmeal (perhaps with raspberry filling, if I figure out how to do it). Plan to bring a draft of your feature story, along with your sweet tooth.

Wednesday, April 9, 2008

The Vortex

Back in 1987 I published a prose poem entitled "The Vortex" in my collection The Masked Ball. My previous post about paparazzi reminded me that I'd written on that exact subject all those years ago. Below is the poem, just in time for Poetry Month (and, in case you're tempted to argue that poems in prose don't qualify as "poetry," keep in mind that several years ago Charles Simic won the Pulitzer Prize for poetry for a collection of prose poems).


THE VORTEX

In the distance twists the braided whine of a tornado. A dog whimpers in the yard, turning circles, while chickens flutter and jump at the sky. Light flickers in the kitchen as clouds roll and collide like oil slicked on water. A pickup truck scurries to the side of a road backhoed among rows of corn. Pa and Jimmy, both in overalls, run for the ravine of the irrigation ditch. Above, a black fist motions thumb-down to the landscape, snubbing out houses and barns like picnic ants on a checkered tablecloth. Ma and the young ones huddle in the cellar, praying with the pickles and preserves.

At the moment that the sky screams and the thumb stubs the ravine, jumping next to the house, which splinters and moans like a violin crushed under a work boot, Dorothy, thrusting her head out from the pig sty, clicks off a roll that frames the whole event, launching her career in journalism, pulling her, at last, away from this place.


—Greg Boyd

Paparazzi 101


Our "celebrity culture" has spawned a horde of photo "journalists" we call "paparazzi" (a term that comes from the "street photographer" character Paparazzo in Fellini's 1961 film, La Dolce Vita). These free-lance photographers stalk public figures and their families, hoping to document them in unflattering poses or compromising situations and sell the photographs to various publications. Some paparazzi have gone as far as to intentionally provoke their subjects into violent responses they can then document. Others have rented helicopters to spy on private property from the air or even initiated automobile accidents in order to document a celebrity's reaction.

How does U.S. law define and protect "editorial use" and free speech?

Imagine a class in "Paparazzi 101", in which students armed with digital cameras are assigned the task of following "campus celebrities" to their favorite restaurants and relentlessly hounding visiting lecturers. In such a class students might even learn "trade secrets" such as staging a bomb scare or pulling a fire alarm to get celebrities out of a building, or posing as a family member to gain access to a hospital room.

I'm joking, of course, about the class (though not about the excesses of the paparazzi).

Friday, April 4, 2008

Coming to a Blog Near You: Sweet Briar Profiles


I'll be creating a link from this blog to a new blog called "Sweet Briar Profiles," which will be available for everyone to read as soon as a few of you correct your profiles, secure your subject's permission to publish, and send me a text file in MS Word format. Please try your best to get permission to share your work. For those of you who want to revise your profile again before posting it, I'll be happy to help you with further suggestions.

Update: I've put up the new blog. So far Amanda, Jennifer, and Jordan have made their profiles available. The link is in the pink navigation bar to the right. You can also get there via this link: http://sweetbriarprofiles.blogspot.com

Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Portfolio, Notebook, Feature Story

Don't forget that at the end of the semester you will need to turn in a complete portfolio of your news stories, blog review, and other writings you've done for the class. You may also include any further revisions you've done of the news stories. 

You will also need to turn in your reporter's notebook so that I can see the kind of notes you took while reporting your stories. 

All of this material is due no later than the last day of final exams, along with your final project feature story.  

Wednesday, March 26, 2008

The Case of the Hovering Bust


Okay, so my question about "The Twinkie Defense" was too easy. (Can you say Google?) Here's one that might actually require you to "leave the building," as Tom Wolfe says.  My guess is that you won't have to literally leave the building, just walk away from your laptop for a couple of minutes and talk to a few people. 

If you want to solve this little mystery, I'd like you to write up your response as a short feature story.  I'll even accept it in place of one of your news stories. Here's the catch: Only one person can complete this challenge.  The first person to email me the correct response to the questions below gains the exclusive right to cover the story.

Who exactly does the bust that hovers over our classroom represent? Why is he there? How did it get there? What were they thinking? How long has he been spying on students? Is there a camera connected to his eyes? You get the idea. Tell me all about that crazy bust in FL 302. Oh yes, I'd like to have some quotes from your sources as well...


Friday, March 21, 2008

Doggone Blogs


It seems that now even dogs have their own blogs. CNN ran a story on its website today about people who have started blogs to imaginatively give voice to their pets. Apparently, these would-be humorists adopt the point of view of their four-legged friends in their postings. 
Does this trend hint at a new kind of psychosis? The article includes analysis by psychologist Larina Kase, who says that canine blogging is just a harmless way to share interests and relieve stress. Kase describes doglogging as "21rst century dog-walking." If that's the case, I guess dogs are destined to be as overweight as their human friends.

Nevertheless, I'm not sure how you should react if my dog Skip starts making posts here...



Sunday, March 16, 2008

A Reminder

Please remember to get to the library and read (or better still, make a photocopy and read) Tom Wolfe's introduction to The New Journalism. The book is on reserve, so ask for it at the front desk. You will need to turn in a 1-2 page reader's response to the essay on Tuesday, March 25. You should also be prepared to discuss the essay in class.

Another important date is Thursday, March 27. Your engaging, brilliantly written, completely error-free profiles are due then. I encourage you to arrange a time to discuss a draft of your profile well in advance of that date. I will also be happy to comment on any drafts you email me in advance. Don't wait until the last day or even the last week. Writers need time to revise. 

Vixens Gone Wild (in 1491, no less)


I love the cover art on old pulp fiction books. I found this one, published in 1954, at an antique store in Lynchburg for a dollar. At that price, how could I resist? 

Here are some highlights from the dust jacket copy: "Men called her a witch and a wanton. Certainly the Lady Janet Kennedy, nicknamed Flaming Janet, bewitched King James of Scotland no less than her first lover, the Lord of Lochinvar. Ambitious, willful and as fiery as her nickname—here is a romantic heroine in the grand manner... When for a wager she bathed nude in the Black Loch in the dark of the moon, there were those who said she had sold herself to the devil; her family in haste betrothed her to Gordon of Lochinvar, slow of wit, heavy of body."

So it goes.

Thursday, March 13, 2008

The Twinkie Defense


The results of our poll to determine the most suitable refreshments for our class party show that most of you favor pizza, salad, and home-baked cookies. The distant runner-up was the primary school "dream lunch" of grilled cheese sandwiches, tomato soup, and Hostess Twinkies. 
At least now no one will be tempted to employ the "Twinkie Defense" to justify poor performance on final exams...

Here's a little research problem for our legal department. Who can tell me exactly what the "Twinkie Defense" means and how did the term originate?

Other SBC blogs

In addition to the wonderful blogs all of you have been publishing, here's a list of some of my other favorite SBC blogs.

Lynn Rainville's fascinating local history blog.

Librarian Liz Kent's helpful guide to databases and research.

English professor Dave Griffith's blog about his terrific book and related subjects.

A terrific blog by a former student who did a wine-making internship.

Strange and funny observations...

A visiting fellow at VCCA kept this blog during her residency.
 

Thursday, March 6, 2008

Why I Want a Husband?

In our class discussion of "Why I Want a Wife" some students expressed weariness with what they view as the lingering attitudes born of the strident feminism of the 70s. This morning I read an Associated Press story online with the following headline: "Men Who do Housework Get More Sex." According to the AP story, The Council on Contemporary Families has released a report that suggests men now do twice as much housework as they did four decades ago. In the story, psychologist Joshua Coleman, author of The Lazy Husband: How to Get Men to do More Parenting and Housework, says that sharing household chores can even lead to a richer sex life.

Monday, March 3, 2008

Sidecars


Sidecars, on the other hand, are those funny outriggers with wheels that allow a passenger to ride alongside a motorcycle. A sidecar is apparently also the name of a cocktail, the contents of which you'll have to research yourselves.

Sidebars


Sidebars are used to provide additional in-depth information related to a main story. For example, a story about a murder trial might feature a capsule profile of the judge, prosecutor, or defense attorney as a sidebar. In the example here, taken from USA Today, the part of the page layout circled in blue ink is a sidebar feature (though physically located beneath the photo caption and surrounded by the type of the main story) which relates specific concerns of everyday Americans to the main story about the president's State of the Union address.

Friday, February 22, 2008

Reviewing


Whenever we consider, evaluate, and offer our opinion on something—a text, a movie, a meal, a new product—we become reviewers. Reviews are arguments that writers need to support with observations and facts. Keeping in mind a few simple strategies will help you organize your reviews.

Briefly summarize the content and state the purpose of what you are reviewing. 

Assess the content. What works and what doesn't? Did you stay up all night reading the novel because you couldn't put it down? Did the ideas in the blog challenge your assumptions and lead you to discover something new? Were the vegetables overcooked? Was the actress who played the troubled teen too old for the role?

Ask yourself how others would respond. Would your sophisticated readers really enjoy the kitschy atmosphere of the dance club? Would people relate to a lead actor who seems incapable of expressing emotion? Is the blog boring after the third sentence? 

Finally, to be a creditable reviewer you must appear to be knowledgeable about the subject. Presenting background about the context of what you are reviewing will help educate your readers and establish their trust in you as a source of information.

Linklogs, Vlogs, Blooks


Before you write your feature/review about blogs at SBC, you should research blogging so that you understand the history, context, and implications of this relatively new form of mass communication. To help you get into the spirit, here are a few assorted facts about web logs. 
Blogs have become part of the way we report and receive news. The "user generated content" of blogs has impacted politics, journalism, and entertainment around the world. According to blog search engine service Technorati, there were more than 112 million blogs as of December, 2006. 

A "blook" is a book based on a blog. Some of the best "blooks" have been based on the first-hand reporting posted in blogs by U.S. soldiers in Iraq.  One good example is Colby Buzzell's narrative, My War: Killing Time in Iraq.

Linklogs are blogs that present on-going compilations of interesting links to other web sites or blogs.

Vlogs are video blogs. They often take the form of real or fictional videotaped diaries. One of the most famous is lonelygirl15, which was originally presented on YouTube as the vlog of a 16-year-old girl (portrayed by actress Jessica Rose), but later proved to be a hoax. 

Thursday, February 21, 2008

A Question for the Ages...

Fame, Fortune, Feminism

Here's a chance for you to write an essay in place of one of your required news stories for this course and maybe even win yourself a few bucks to play with on the weekends. First prize is $150.00 and second prize is $100.00. Not bad for school work. Essays are due by March 21.

The Women and Gender Studies Committee also invites students to comment on the following subject: "Women and Gender Studies at Sweet Briar: Should it live or should it die?"  The Voice will publish the winning responses. 

Let me know if you plan to work on either challenge. I'll be happy to provide you with more details.

Talking Up The Voice


I encourage each of you to get involved with the Sweet Briar Voice. Writing for a student-edited newspaper is an excellent way to improve your writing, learn about interesting events and people at SBC, and your sharpen your skills as a journalist. Even if you plan to work outside of journalism, showing potential employers clippings of your published articles will clearly demonstrate your writing skills. With many seniors graduating this spring, the paper has a real need for talented, enthusiastic replacements in key positions. Don't let this great opportunity slip by. 

Sunday, February 17, 2008

Throwing rocks at "Rock my Network"

It seems Theodora Stites' article "Rock My Network" caused an uproar among some young readers when The New York Times republished a condensed version in July, 2006. I thought you might enjoy a link to one particularly combative response, as well as the author's reply:

Saturday, February 16, 2008

Your Editor is Your Friend?

In the warmest, fuzziest, most idealistic recesses of my imagination, I imagine you thinking of me as your editor instead of as the unbearable tyrant who insists you update and correct your blog with such maddening regularity. Journalists depend on their editors for advice and guidance. During the workshop sessions of the class I will listen to your ideas, try to answer your questions, and offer suggestions about your work. 

Student writers who budget a little extra time (before class, during my office hours, or via email) to discuss their story ideas, drafts of profiles and stories, and strategies for structure and revision, will likely perform better than those who don't. I encourage you to take advantage of the extra help and support I am always happy to provide. 


Profile: Researching and Reporting


Thursday, February 21 you should come to class with the date and time of your initial interview with the subject of your profile. If you haven't done so already, you will need to start making phone calls and sending emails to the person, requesting a meeting. Be persistent. Interesting people tend to lead busy lives. Sometimes it takes several tries to reach a subject. Though you leave a message, don't wait for the person to return your call. Try again later the same day—several times if need be. Be polite and resolute. Once your subject has agreed to meet with you, be sure to thank him or her in advance. If you have already met with your subject, set up an interview with someone close to him or her (co-worker, spouse, etc.). Bring the date and time of these meetings to class.

You will also need to bring to class on Thursday either a draft of your profile or detailed notes on the background of your subject. Ask yourself exactly what specific information you can find out about the person prior to the interview. Has the person published articles, books, opinions or letters in newspapers? What do public records tell you? What does an internet search reveal? Knowing something about your subject's field of work or other interests will give you valuable information for your profile and help you shape the questions you ask in your interviews. 

For example, if you were profiling a campus police officer who you knew also bred Arabian horses and ran a travel/adventure business, you would want to know a little about being a police officer at SBC, Arabian horses, and the adventure travel business before you interviewed your subject.  

Wednesday, February 13, 2008

Some Suggestions for Reading Critically


The readings I assign throughout the semester have two purposes. Close reading and analysis of both the content and structure of these texts should help students improve their critical reading skills. More importantly, the texts serve as models of excellence for various styles of print journalism. 

When reading the assigned profiles, news stories, and feature articles, you should first arrive at an understanding of what the story is about. If you don't grasp the main idea of the article first, you can't successfully analyze the structure. Often profiles and other types of narrative journalism have micro and macro levels of meaning. The macro level idea connects the subject to a universal theme. Many times authors imply rather than directly state these "big picture" themes, thereby allowing readers to fully participate in the discovery. For example, the micro level of Chuck Palahniuk's profile of Marilyn Manson reveals a complex, intelligent artist who is surprisingly self-aware and optimistic. Palahniuk combines anecdotes, narrative, description, quotations, and symbolic and telling details that lead readers to an expected conclusion. The macro level seems to condemn reactionary judgments based on ignorance. In other words, the theme of "Reading Yourself" is "don't judge what you don't know."

Once you comprehend the meaning, note how the author has constructed her story. Try to identify unusual and striking leads, lead quotes, kickers, "telling details", and effective use of language. Does the story have a narrative element? If so, what is the chronology and narrative structure? What kinds of specific background facts does the author use? In "Reading Yourself" you should note, for example, that the author bases the structure of the profile on a Tarot card reading, a device which allows for multiple shifts in the chronology of the narrative, from present, to past, to future and back.

Finally, what is your reaction to the text? Is the reporting fair and balanced? What questions are left unanswered? How successful is the author in selecting and arranging the facts, key details, quotes, and background material of the story to communicate the main idea?

Tuesday, February 12, 2008

Reading Quizzes?


I'm starting to wonder if our class needs the motivation of quizzes on the assigned readings in order to stimulate discussions of these texts. From now on, in class I will assign two students at a time to lead discussions of each story assigned for the next session. However, I plan to keep the dreaded quiz in my toolbox (or briefcase), just in case...

Thursday, February 7, 2008

Revising Your Blogs

As you begin work on your second blog entry, think about how you might improve what's already there as well. Some of you might want to consider adding a brief introduction near the top of your layout so that first-time visitors can quickly understand the focus of the blog. Experiment with design elements to improve the visual aspect of your blog. Add photos, graphics, video, sound, links, polls and other multi-media elements to create interest.

Remember that I expect you to revise the text in your posts based on what you are learning in class about editing prose. How can you make your prose leaner and more direct? Would applying "The Paramedic Method" help eliminate awkward and wordy sentences and passive voice constructions? 

Whenever you make a new post or write a story, you need to research, report, write, revise, and edit (then revise again and edit once more).

Revised List of Assignments

Life got just a little bit easier for Print and Electronic Journalism I students Thursday, as I cut two columns and a review from the portfolio of writing due this semester.  Students will now write three news stories instead of two, and there will be more emphasis on the quality of student blogs. 

Here's a revised list of the assignments due this semester. Update your syllabus.

Reporter's Notebook
Blog (updated at least once a week, preferably more often)
Reading response x 3
News story x 3
"Blogs at Sweet Briar" review
Budget line proposals 
In-depth profile
Feature article (or investigative story)

Three Little Guinea-Pigs

I thought you might like to see some more information about "Guinea-Pigging" for medical research. Below are links to discussions on the topic. You'll also find a link to a company that matches potential research subjects with upcoming studies. As professor Elliot says in his article in The New Yorker, "This is not something you or I do. This is something the poor do so the rich can get better drugs." Clearly medicine cannot advance without human testing. Do you think there should be more regulation to ensure that these studies are safe and ethical?



P. S.  Amanda draws first blood in the "find error's in Greg's blog" contest, proving in the process that a spell check program is no substitute for careful proofreading. Brava, Amanda! 

Wednesday, February 6, 2008

Profiles

By now all of you should have selected someone from SBC to profile. Your written proposals for the profile are due in class Thursday, Feb. 7. We will look closely at your notes, background research, and drafts of the profile over the coming weeks. 

You should have already spoken to your subject and secured his or her consent. Next you will need to set up your first meeting. Be sure to do background research before you begin the interviewing and observation process. If you already know something about the person and his or her work, you will be able to ask better questions and establish a better working relationship.

Blogmania

This semester Print and Electronic Journalism I students at SBC will create and maintain original blogs, which they will update at least once a week. Choose a newsworthy subject for your blog—preferably a subject that will interest members of the SBC community at large. Don't forget to vote each week for your favorite student blog update on the right.